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Sun Aug 30, 2009, 3:50 PM
so, as you probably saw. I have to get some of my stuff published in my college's literary magazine. or at least submit a portfolio or something like that to them. sooo... if ya'll would pretty please tell me if there's anything that doesn't work or doesn't flow in my poems so I can correct it. or even if there's anything, any comment, any critique that will help me embarass myself less in front of my school... that'd be really cool. thanks!

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  • Interests: reading, writing, tennis
  • Favourite band or musician: Breaking Benjamin, Trapt, Sanctus Real
  • Favourite genre of music: I've found that I like a lot of alternative, but ultimately I'm just a lyrics person.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Amelia Atwater-Rhodes, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
  • Personal Quote: Everybody loves me, they just don't all realize it yet.

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:iconbloodvayne:
Thanks so very much for the :+fav:

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:iconthesilver-eyedwolf:
Thanks a ton for the fav. Means a lot.

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:iconsorrowfulnightfalls:
no problem.

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:frail: Hate all you want, but you can't break the girl who thinks nothing of you. :frail:
:iconlordbeazy:
And another fav! Thank you. :rose:

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Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconsorrowfulnightfalls:
I fav what I like... I secretly am rather picky. although I'm sure some peoples never realize that.

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:frail: Hate all you want, but you can't break the girl who thinks nothing of you. :frail:
:iconlordbeazy:
Well thanks for the pickiness! :D

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconfly-high-butterfly14:
thanks a heap for the fav!

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comment peux-tu me regarder et ne pas me voir?
:iconsorrowfulnightfalls:
you're welcome!

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:frail: Hate all you want, but you can't break the girl who thinks nothing of you. :frail:
:iconbloodvayne:
Thanks for the :+fav:

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...no one said that this life was easy, but did that no one ever live a life this hard... ~jawbreaker - ashtray monument
:iconsorrowfulnightfalls:
thanks for the poem.

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:frail: Hate all you want, but you can't break the girl who thinks nothing of you. :frail:

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